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Tuesday, December 8, 2020

The Solar Eclipse.

 

Dark blue clouds and dark red clouds fill up the night sky. As the sun shines bright the moon turns orange and leaves a bright glow in the atmosphere.


The clouds are as fluffy as sheep and as soft as silk. The sun as hot as laser beams and the moon as cold as ice.


The sky dark as space but at the same time as bright as the stars.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ruby! really like your story. Next time add a bit more. Good work! Mikaela

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