The Rollercoaster Ride
The wheels began turning as the carriage started
moving along the tracks. I felt like I was going to
vomit I felt sick. When I went really fast down the
rollercoaster my stomach dropped. I was excited
when I got on the roller coaster because I wanted
to go really fast down it. I had butterflies in my
stomach when I went up and down really fast.
It was a really thrilling ride it was scary and bumpy
I was really sick after the ride. It made me really
dizzy and when i got off I could barely walk. It
was so fast I almost fell out of the carriage and
i was on the top and then I went so fast down
the tracks I vomited and screamed because it
was so fast i could have fallen out of it. When
it finished I couldn't walk because I was so dizzy
and tired.
moving along the tracks. I felt like I was going to
vomit I felt sick. When I went really fast down the
rollercoaster my stomach dropped. I was excited
when I got on the roller coaster because I wanted
to go really fast down it. I had butterflies in my
stomach when I went up and down really fast.
It was a really thrilling ride it was scary and bumpy
I was really sick after the ride. It made me really
dizzy and when i got off I could barely walk. It
was so fast I almost fell out of the carriage and
i was on the top and then I went so fast down
the tracks I vomited and screamed because it
was so fast i could have fallen out of it. When
it finished I couldn't walk because I was so dizzy
and tired.
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