Quick Write 22/9/2020

It was a stormy night when I looked out my window I saw a house floating it had roots atached to it going up into the sky. Thats when I noticed it was my neighbours house. I ran outside hoping nobody was in the house I jumped up and managed to get a root I used it to pull myself up. When I pulled myself up I went inside the house to find the neigbour and his family hiding downstairs wanting to get back to ground.

Sharons DFI

 

For DFI I worked with Toby and we sorted the comments into good comments and bad comments. We had a conversation about why the comments are good or bad. The comments highlighted red are bad comments the ones that are highlighted green are good comments.

Stuck (Quick Write)

(Friends- Caily.W. Olivia.T. Willow.B.)

Stuck!

 It was a nice summer day so my friends and I had decided to go on a boat. We had fallen asleep on the boat and something bad had happened, we had crashed into and island. We looked up and saw a storm coming our way, we had to hide. We split up and gathered sticks to make a hut to stay in. I went and grabbed food and water from the boat while the  others made a fire. We were ready for the storm when I grabbed food and water I had also grabbed some blankets to stay warm. Then the storm hit the island we all screamed we needed to get back home.

Fantasia Poem

Poem Notes!

Word: Sunrise

How it would look: bright, blinding, yellow, white, shining, circular.

Eyes: Bright blue. 

Breath: Invisible.

How it moves: Gliding through the sky. Slowly.

How it feels: Hot. Hard.

What its carrying: A suitcase of light.

Voice and what it would say: The voice would be soft. It would say "Hellooooo"

Quick Write 4/9/20

 A baby monkey was all alone in the forest. Rain was pouring down so the monkey had to use a leaf to shelter itself. I wanted to go and help but I felt like if I move closer the monkey will get scared and run away. I really wanted to help but I didnt I left the monkey alone and left the forest hoping nobody had seen me. I felt bad for just leaving but I shouldnt have been poking my head around the forest. I could have gotten hurt, I should have stayed home.