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Thursday, September 17, 2020

Stuck (Quick Write)

(Friends- Caily.W. Olivia.T. Willow.B.)

Stuck!


 It was a nice summer day so my friends and I had decided to go on a boat. We had fallen asleep on the boat and something bad had happened, we had crashed into and island. We looked up and saw a storm coming our way, we had to hide. We split up and gathered sticks to make a hut to stay in. I went and grabbed food and water from the boat while the  others made a fire. We were ready for the storm when I grabbed food and water I had also grabbed some blankets to stay warm. Then the storm hit the island we all screamed we needed to get back home.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 19, 2020 at 1:54 PM

    Ayo Ruby, I love your blog post! There is nothing you need to fix!
    This made me think about a story I made called raft but I never finished it...
    Great story Ruby bye

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  2. AnonymousOctober 19, 2020 at 2:47 PM

    Kia ora, Ruby! You know me, (Izzy)
    I really like this story and it reminds me of a movie! (I cant remember what its called)
    Next time add more detail, what happens next?

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