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Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Quick Write 22/9/2020


It was a stormy night when I looked out my window I saw a house floating it had roots atached to it going up into the sky. Thats when I noticed it was my neighbours house. I ran outside hoping nobody was in the house I jumped up and managed to get a root I used it to pull myself up. When I pulled myself up I went inside the house to find the neigbour and his family hiding downstairs wanting to get back to ground.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 13, 2020 at 2:47 PM

    Kia ora i'm Stella from Yaldhurst Model School
    I really enjoyed reading you story.You taught me some really cool ideas for my writing but don't worry I will not copy all of it. Why did you write about this? From Stella

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  2. AnonymousNovember 17, 2020 at 7:27 PM

    Kia ora I,m Mikayla from Yaldhurst Model School
    i like this because the house is flating
    this rember me of when i was 2 and i move house to where i live now

    next time you could make people in it too.
    from Mikayla

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