See
Bright lights
Hear
Kids shouting
Smell
Hot salty chips
Taste
Warm hot chocolate
Feel
Soft clothes from the clothing storeThe smell of hot salty chips swimming in the air as I walked in. While bright lights blinded me as I went to go get food. The smell getting stronger as I walked closer.
The taste of delicious hot chocolates and salty chips. The taste of cheese melting in my mouth as I ate the burgers. The taste of ice cold drinks freezing my mouth.
The feel of silk clothes from the clothing stores.
Hi Ruby
ReplyDeleteThis is good work
I like how to you have them with just small words and then at the end you have a sentence for each thing you said
good job
-Charlotte
Kia Ora Ruby,I super love this blog post because it is telling us about what you can smell, see, hear and fell and we did that today!!
ReplyDeleteWhy did you blog about this?
Next time you could put some more of all scenes so that we get to know more about the mall?
- Paige B
Hi Ruby I'm Riley from Yaldhurst Model School. Today we were writing our our senses but it was about dog's on a beach. There are alot on feel maybe try do some more on the other ones? This remind me of today and all the other days we were writing our senses it was fun.
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Hello Riley.
DeleteThanks for your comment after feel i have described everything. Sorry if you found that confusing I understand.
Ruby